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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Wed 1 Nov 2017 - 20:20

Chapter 3 excerpt of my treehouse fic set in 2007 when the "core four" Arthur Muffy Francine Buster are 17 in senior year. So I'm going to make them 1990s babies.
I'm much better at teenage/adult Arthur than kids but I'm writing chapter one. 1998-2000 eight to ten...

Here's an excerpt from my fave chapter so far
Let me know what you think.. Please!!!

2007 late spring school is nearly over for the four seniors of Elwood high
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Arthur and Francine had been on and off for the past two years but the burning desire inside of them both was just too much for the horny teenagers to handle. True, they hadn't slept around despite the odd kisses between other friends at school including Molly, George and Sue Ellen ( both Francine and Arthur had made out with the very open and sweet cat at age 14) Molly kissed Francine when she was 15, sending Arthur into a jealous rage which led him to have a steamy make out session with Fletcher whom was more than happy to take things further but Arthur declined....
By their 16th birthday, Arthur and Francine found themselves both single and miserable. They met at the treehouse and sent tweets back and forth...
One yr later:
Francine clambered up the ladder and crawled up to Arthur with a yearning in her made up eyes...
"We need to get back together or I will just argh"..." Die" she blurted out in a flurry of teenage angst.
"Me too baby" Arthur replied.
They both shared a passionate kiss.
"You are my person" Francine cooed.
"gag me now" DW snarled.
Arthur ignored his sisters rude remark and responded by kissing her on the cheek, the hands, the ears, and the lips with a huge pucker.
"They're like made for each other" Muffy gushed.
DW was still waiting for a response to her question
"Well, girl or boyscout cookies?" She yelled this time.
"The ones with peanut chocolate" Buster replied, eating a few as he spoke.
"Ha" DW beamed. She started texting the tibble twins. "I knew it" she grinned. "Girl scout cookies win" "I don't have to kiss you haha"
Muffy was appalled by the crumbs Buster was leaving all over himself.
"You're a slob" she snarled.
"You're a slut" he retorted.
Francine and Arthur stopped their romantic embrace and gaped at both Buster and Muffy.
"Wow" DW rubbed her hands together with glee. "This oughta be good"
"Get out" Arthur ordered. "Or I'll throw you out"
"I'm telling Mom you bastard" DW yelled climbing out of the treehouse.
Francine grabbed Arthur's black shirt
"I love it when you get angry" she whispered
Arthur could barely contain himself
"Buster, Muffy" "Take your fighting elsewhere" he basically ordered.
Muffy was shocked and saddened.
"Some friend you are Francine" she spat, watching her friend since elementary school with long briwn hair lay under Arthur in a silk top and jeggings.
Buster grinned. "Way to go" he winked.
Anything sexual excited the male bunny.
Muffy hadn't forgotten his "slut" comment and he was met with a slap in the face once the exited the tree house.
Buster frowned then smiled.
"Oh that felt good" he jeered.
"If I tell you your skirt is too short will you gag me?"  
Muffy felt flushed and angry at the same time highly aroused.
"Oh well why not?" She shrugged, grabbing the slovenly dressed bunny by the arm.
"What's one more guy?" She said walking off.
She then turned around and winked at a very horny Buster.
"To add to my collection" she said licking her lips.
Buster followed while looking at that ass in her skirt.
"Oh yeah, mine too" he drooled.

Meanwhile
Arthur lay undressed on top of Francine.
"Did we just legitimately get back together?" He asked, clasping her ample clevage.
"I'd say so" The dark haired girl replied with a lick to his face.
"Wanna go to prom?" He asked, knowing the answer
Francine giggled. "Duh"
They then heard footsteps climbing up the ladder.
"Dammit" they both yelped.
Putting their clothes on they were still only half dressed when DW entered with the tibbles.
Francine was wearing a bra and denim skirt. Arthur only has his jeans on.
"What did I just walk in on?" DW grimaced..horrified "Gross Francine"
The tibbles weren't complaining, they were too busy staring like gold fish at Arthur's girlfriends breasts.
"Get out" Arthur yelled.
"Ewww like we're gonna stay" she snarled.
Francine laughed and they left much to the tibbles dismay.
Arthur placed his hands on his girlfriends waist as she sat up.
"What's so funny?"
Francine looked up at him and stroked his face. "You, the treehouse, this" she pointed to the clothing that was still not back on, lying on the other side of the little house
Arthur started to laugh.
"True" he said, placing a kiss on Francine's forehead.
"I guess being honest paid off" she sighed happily while stroking Arthur's toned right leg.
Arthur nodded with instant arousal....
"Wanna go again?" He said in a husky tone.
Francine placed her boyfriend's arms around her bra and he removed the clasp...
"Does that answer your question?" She panted heavily..


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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by Kerry9Story on Wed 1 Nov 2017 - 20:56


^Francine + Arthur
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Wed 1 Nov 2017 - 20:57

Pretty much Wink
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by Kerry9Story on Wed 1 Nov 2017 - 21:02

ArthurFrancineFan wrote:Buster followed while looking at that ass in her skirt.
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Wed 1 Nov 2017 - 22:31

WTF is that?
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by Kerry9Story on Thu 2 Nov 2017 - 0:21

Buster
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Thu 2 Nov 2017 - 0:36

I need some pretty pics for this story xxxx
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by fudgy brown sludge on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 3:54

I have read it and it is a very well authored work full of hot spots and lustful thoughts. I will wait until you write the sequel and I will read it and wish it had been me who wrote it. I am like buster as you write him as I as well have many impure desires but do not know how to act on them to get what I want.
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 4:06

Thank you fudgy Smile
That is a major compliment. I'm very grateful
Lol yeah well everyone identifies with an Arthur character :-)
I'm writing the second chapter
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by fudgy brown sludge on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 4:16

You are welcome ma'am and I will read the next chapter after you have posted it and say I have read it and enjoyed it.  You will thank me and write another chapter that I will read and then another like a wooden doll within a doll within a doll and then you will have a novel and live in fame.
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 4:48

Uh yup sure thing Mr Ratburn XD
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by Buster & Molly Lover on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 14:58

Sounds like a teenage drama ideal for The CW or The WB. like Dawson's Creek or One Tree Hill. study
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 17:10

Dawson's Creek? Lol nooooo
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by Kerry9Story on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 19:07


more plx
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri 3 Nov 2017 - 20:59

Yup sis, more on the way Wink
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Post by Kerry9Story on Sat 4 Nov 2017 - 19:10

fudgy all jelly cux he wish he had sk1LLz.
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sun 5 Nov 2017 - 0:56

Lol and Muffy. Her writing is all about herself and she doesn't know what a pen and paper is.
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Post by Kerry9Story on Sun 5 Nov 2017 - 10:38

well youll do more soon i hope. I love you
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Re: Teenage part of my fanfic

Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sun 5 Nov 2017 - 15:32

Thanks sis xx
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