The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

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The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

Post by WheeljackDude on Mon Aug 18, 2014 8:01 pm

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(1) pick up where the last poster left off;
(2) finish your portion of the story in an open-ended manner so that the next poster can pick up where you left off; and
(3) remain within (or close to) the mall.  This rule's pretty relaxed, of course.  If the adventure winds up absolutely having to wander elsewhere, then so be it!

Setting: Mill Creek Mall (http://arthur.wikia.com/wiki/Mill_Creek_Mall).

Sister Thread: The Supermarket Chain Story


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Re: The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

Post by BionicBunny on Mon Aug 18, 2014 8:06 pm

Bitzi and Buster enter the mall.Buster immediately runs to the food court,but Bitzi chases after him.Buster hides in the plants to avoid being spotted by her,and...

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Re: The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

Post by Kerry9Story on Tue Aug 19, 2014 6:10 pm

sit his a$$ in the plant an goes pl0p
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Re: The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

Post by A Lotta Moms on Wed Aug 20, 2014 2:15 pm

Buster looks up from over the plants, his eyes scanning across the infinite lines of colorful tables interspersed with plants, trash bins and people.  The commotion around him from daily shoppers blends into a regular stream of nearly indistinguishable sound.  The savory and sweet aroma of the food court and its diverse, yet universal handful of Sbarro, China Wok, Chipotle, Cheesesteak and Chickin Lickin offerings intemesh in his nasal cavity, permeating his round bunny head and nearly touching the edges of his stimulated taste buds.

Taken by the many senses of the shopping center, Buster is entranced and feels a brief faintness in his head, nearly losing vision for a second or two as if he'd just been put under at the dentist's office with nitrous oxide.  His pupils dilate.  Dazed, he takes a leaf from the nearby plant into his mouth, so overwhelmed by the beautiful simplicity of the moment, and chews on it as the sound of trickling water and lush rainforests pass through his mind.  He can feel his legs beginning to tingle.  He runs his hands along the smooth, thin bark of the potted miniature trees he's nestled between.  The welcoming texture resonates throughout his entire body, leaving a thin, dewy residue on his fingers.

Legs pass by him as he remains crouched, crossing him like tree trunks or perhaps propeller blades.  His pupils sharpen.  Rising up, he stumbles before regaining a small sliver of his senses - just enough to maintain himself without collapsing.  Daylight floods the food court through the glass ceiling above.  The occasional bird flies overhead.  He feels as if he has been born anew.

He then remembers the indelible words of John Morris...but promptly forgets them, overwhelmed by the warm, welcoming aroma of Cinnabon...
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Re: The Mill Creek Mall Chain Story

Post by Kerry9Story on Wed Sep 10, 2014 10:45 am

got his r0cks 0ff im sure -_-
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