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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Mon Jul 27, 2015 3:39 am

Well as someone who has written many a story, including Arthur fanfics i do know
I am stuck with writers block right now
But if i ask advice, i would use it.

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Fri Jul 31, 2015 2:59 am

This forum will remind everyone when Andrew and DW is updated. So be sure to check back every now and then for new chapters and new seasons.
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri Jul 31, 2015 3:27 am

there is only one chapter so far right?

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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Fri Jul 31, 2015 3:34 am

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11352168/1/Andrew-And-DW-Season-1

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Thu Aug 13, 2015 8:29 am

I finally got the new chapter up: Descent Toward Darkness: Part 2
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Thu Aug 13, 2015 7:51 pm

yes i read it and gave some advice

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Aug 29, 2015 12:10 am

I just posted part 3 of Descent Toward Darkness.
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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Aug 29, 2015 12:30 pm

Oh, since i'm not getting a lot of views, i changed the new girl's name to Shelly May Brave and changing the story back to Regular.
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sat Aug 29, 2015 3:29 pm

Lack of views and reviews can be due to a story being too dark
there are other darker Arthur stories out there that do not get views or reviews because its something, for some reason that the fandom do not like much.

I would keep the constant hitting, physical abuse and OOC behaviour with arthur down as its deterring some viewers of your fic.
Also, being Arthur people do tend to like a bit of romance between at least one couple in the fic, even if its muffy with someone. There has not been anything.
If Francine is Arthurs GF OR Buster and Arthur have an attraction then you should elaborate on that

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:24 pm

ArthurFrancineFan wrote:Lack of views and reviews can be due to a story being too dark
there are other darker Arthur stories out there that do not get views or reviews because its something, for some reason that the fandom do not like much.

I would keep the constant hitting, physical abuse and OOC behaviour with arthur down as its deterring some viewers of your fic.
Also, being Arthur people do tend to like a bit of romance between at least one couple in the fic, even if its muffy with someone. There has not been anything.
If Francine is Arthurs GF OR Buster and Arthur have an attraction then you should elaborate on that

I have been keeping the stuff to a minimum. I even redid the story and made it less dark.
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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:58 pm

Whil i work on the series, i might work on a small story about DW.
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sat Aug 29, 2015 6:38 pm

Well less romance equals less interest.
If you have relationships in a story, they would at least hold hands or kiss, if not at school then afterwards.
I understand you might not know how relationships work but that is how you show affection.
Sorry to be blunt but you are losing views, particularly timmyturnerfan

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Aug 29, 2015 6:44 pm

ArthurFrancineFan wrote:Well less romance equals less interest.
If you have relationships in a story, they would at least hold hands or kiss, if not at school then afterwards.
I understand you might not know how relationships work but that is how you show affection.
Sorry to be blunt but you are losing views, particularly timmyturnerfan

Oh to hell with it. I'm taking the story out.
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sun Aug 30, 2015 12:54 am

uh okay.....?

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Post by WatteauMasterDetective on Sun Aug 30, 2015 3:01 am

I don't think a dark tone is really why you ain't getting less views.

I've updated my story, and NOT A SINGLE VIEW!

I'm telling you, the fandom ain't doing much these days. So I don't think your story would be that bad.
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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sun Aug 30, 2015 2:58 pm

I decided to work on my Andrew Reckless Story and do the fanfic series afterward.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479387/1/Andrew-Reckless
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sun Aug 30, 2015 6:30 pm

Yes, I think you are right. People have been put off by the trolls and smut that was posted over the last year which is making it more difficult for decent views and reviews

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sun Aug 30, 2015 6:33 pm

ArthurFrancineFan wrote:Yes, I think you are right. People have been put off by the trolls and smut that was posted over the last year which is making it more difficult for decent views and reviews

Well, i ain't gonna stand for that. They need to take that garbage out and ban the writers making all this crap.
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Post by ArthurFrancineFan on Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:05 pm

Tell the mods on ff.net then
they haven't done much in the past but report the stories enough and they'll get rid of them....eventually

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Post by Mr. Freeman on Sat Sep 05, 2015 2:34 pm

Here is the story.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11489333/1/Andrew-Reckless
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